Maybelline Hyper Diamonds GY-1 (Rm35.90 )

It's my first try , and it failed badly lol.

And this is the Essence Kajal Pencil ( Rm4.90 )
I have actually been finding it sine f(x)'s Nu ABO ( Krystal ) and I finally found something similar.
[Dayummypores&blemishes]
Anyone can give me tips ? I seriously fail at smokey eyes , every single time I try. I seriously feel sad that I have such a small crease.
✰LUU